Horror Sequence - Group Task

Within our group, we were given a task to create a horror movie sequence using a range of different shots. I feel our task went quite well, however, there were some inaccuracies. For example there was less than 12 shots and the sequence was only around 30 seconds long; this was purely because we thought we had enough usable footage, yet, some of the clips were not; the storyline could also be put across clearer.

The first shot is an establishing shot of the girl opening the door, following this is an extreme close up of her turning the door knob. After this we see a panning shot (from right to left) of her walking through the hallway; not noticing the fact that there is someone in the corner of the room. This gives me the sense of suspense, it makes me feel intrigued which is the aim of the clip; who is this person and what are they doing in this part of the building. We see the girl try to find her class room in the next two shots, however we see an over the shoulder shot of her realising that she has stumbled into an abandoned part of the college. The next shot is a mid shot, she hears a bang and we can see her turn around. We see an extreme close up of her eyes, this is used to show the fear and confusion of her realising that she is not alone. We then see a static transition cut thats been edited in to dutch angle shot of her walking down the corridor to see what the bang was, within this the clip has been edited to appear like an old CCTV camera that has fell down of the wall. We then see her get attacked/killed by the mysterious figure, with this following an edited slow mo shot of the figure walking away.